Take A Look At My Comedic Video

take an intro to film class...not to be an ass but it really helps. and yes, please dont use photobucket to upload your videos.

As for the joke, I got it but it didn't make me laugh. You need to pull it off way better. Practice makes perfect I guess and remember to plan it out...especially the camera angles. They really looked home movie type shots. Thats all im sayin. Good luck to ya.
 
mark dog -- comedy isn't your thing. have you considered doing horror? horror sells and seems to mesh better with your type of humor. just my opinion.
 
Everyone has to start somewhere. Some people just have a natural eye for film that others don't, but I don't think it's right to hold that against someone...

Mark, thanks for sharing your work. The biggest tip I can give you is:
You seem to be thinking about what you want *in* the shot, but not so much about what's actually in it... That is to say you convey the actions you want to, but they come at the expense of everything else in the frame. Think about every part of the shot, and see if you might can't some things.
Technically it's pretty obvious that you need to do as some others have said - invest in some lighting, sound equipment, and spend a little more time matching your edits. All that will help make your work resonate a little more. And I agree, lose the barf. Make him choke? Dial while choking?
 
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