T2i T2I Short Film trying out different effects...Short Film - The Warning

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Crossroads Films

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the story is a little sketchy because I was more trying to work effects in it but yea...I would like some feed back on how I can improve
 
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man your acting is pretty good! The initial shock reaction is freaking genuine! In the story the time frames seem a bit odd, he says 6 hours left to live, then the main character goes to sleep and wakes up (it seems like a lot more than 6 hours have passed). The effect of getting hit by the car looks pretty descent also. Hope this helps
 
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thx for the feed man...yea the stories a lil sketchy, it was about 3pm and then he went to bed and supposebly woke up at dusk around 8 pm but it didnt look that way...i should of put 6 hours later or something...
 
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