STAND OFF, Who's got the loot?

The GH1 shots are so much better in this than the HVX shots. It's not only the DOF, it's mainly the framing. The composition of the HVX shots just seemed fairly pedestrian for the most part. My favorite of the earlier shots is the handheld OTS on Tom. I think the whole movie might have been nice more handheld. It seemed to fit the story well.

I did really like the final confrontation, and them shooting each other. The final reveal was fun, and tied the whole story together neatly. I always love a good manipulative character.
 
I really liked this one – a clever little short. I loved the location on this, you really used it well. The acting was solid for the most part, a few things others have mentioned. Technically, a few times some camera shake stood out to me, but otherwise it was solid. The story was really well played out - I definitely bought what you were selling on who had the gold, and loved how it turned out. A very nice short, well done.
 
Interesting idea, guys. I won't touch on what's been mentioned as I'm late to the party and don't want to repeat the same things too much. One thing that may have been mentioned but I really wanted was a better establishing shot. Something wider showing where the were in relation to one another.

Aside from that I think this was pretty good. I enjoyed the back and forth and the story was intriguing. Solid dialogue and it looked good as well.
Nicely done, guys.

MAH
 
Just finished this (had to download to get audio). Excellent job. Loved the whole thing. As has been said a wide shot to establish positions would have set the scene a little better. Well worth watching.
 
Good job on this one guys. Liked the dialogue and the character interactions. Great location and score as well. Acting and character direction was on point. I enjoyed this one a lot!
 
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