Some shorts i've done

When I put in the password and hit enter, the page refreshes and it's back to asking for a password. No good - please make it easier to give feedback. Life is short - in general, I won't bother with anything that makes me jump thorough hoops, or even one hoop... passwords, shmaswords - stick it on youtube and make it easy on us, kthxbye.
 
Worked fine for me.

I watched one night.

Best shot: her on the bed at the end. Light was well motivated. Nice camera move.

Worst shot: Party 3 person. She walks of and Rogers head is cut off from nose up and the lighting was horrible. Just flat room lights.

The voices were clear in the sound mix. Though it really lacked depth. The music matched the scenes but the sound transitions need lots of work. I guess this applies for all three.

EDIT: The acting in Steve's room and The Departure was much better.

Overall there was some good shot choices mixed with some not so good, some composition had people kind of half in frame etc. Seems to me though on the quality of some, that some parts are being rushed?
 
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I enjoyed all three even though the first one was depressing. The first two worked really well but the third one seemed a little stretched out to me. The second was even more enjoyable after watching the first because of the comic twist on it. Great Job and keep up the good work
 
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