Some dailies from a feature film.

Some of this looks quite nice in terms of light. I have an issue with some of your frames with the characters way to the side of the frame and nothing else interesting in the frame. I understand it can be an artistic choice to frame a character in one part of the shot, but to have nothing interesting to look at on the side--well it must be very impactful in the film because as a stand alone shot it's a bit bland.

Also, I prefer lockoff tripod shots to still attempt to slightly pan or move. It's just a preference. Lockoff tripod shots in indie films are very risky. If your subject matter doesn't hold up the scene can fall through. Just my two cents.
 
I really enjoyed the footage. I don't mind the framing, quite like that, the "long lens" look works well as well. Good luck!
 
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