SHORT: Short Film - Chase

[JFP]

Hey guys, just wanted to share our latest short called Chase. This was an idea I had for a short almost four years ago, it's pretty simple, just attempting to tackle a genre that we don't have too much experience with. Here's the poster.



And here's the short itself.

Thanks for watching and let me know what you think.

 

[maranfilms]

I hate to be the one to break it to you, But I have seen this exact same concept done about three or four times. Either way it's good practice and still a lot of fun to make. Not to mention fun to edit.

 

[Marlon Ladd]

I agree too. It's definitely great practice. Gotta' get out there and do it. I thought this was decent, but I have also seen it before a few times. I would say some things you could do to improve it would be to get more closeups of the runners showing intensity on their face. Throw some things in there to break or move or shove, like people, use quicker cuts in the editing, like every 2 seconds and I think you really nail it. Just my 2 cents. Keep up the good work.