Short british film i made for uni

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Haleatron

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would love any feedback, i made this as my final piece at University. I got a first for it so i'm pretty pleased with it.

filmed on a Canon 550D with a 50mm 1.8 and a tameron 17 - 55mm
thanks for your time





 
I see u like "Snatch" (my all time favourite film). I love everything. WELL DONE. especially love the sound. What did you use for sound?

there are a couple inconsistencies with the grading but it didnt take me out of it.
 
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I really like the overall concept, the black humour and unpredictability of it. Also good job on sound, editing.

One thing - I think the kids who stole the car from the burglars weren't particularly menacing and the scene where they kicked the driver out of the car was a little clumsy: why didn't he drive away..? Why didn't he put up more of a fight? One of them just rolled out of the car.
 
Decent film :) Some creative shots and obviously there was effort put into them. Very easy to be lazy...but you weren't.

But the driver of the 3 rouges should have acted out his uber posh accent. Way out of place.

For me...the guy who was the non-driver out of the first two was the best actor. Very believable, even if his dialogue was short and sweet. Looked genuinely stress etc. The others had a glint in their eyes and a slight smirk like "I'm making a movie".
 
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