"SERIAL" - by Jason Sanders

I have to say the story was very solid. I liked the knife being left on the table because I assumed the killer was going to play with her and gave her a means to defend herself. I didn't take it as though she was waking from a dream so much as from being suffocated, or drugged, or something to that effect. Good twist to see she is the killer, liked the sound effects at the end in particular. The newscast felt fake but unless you get a budget for a news anchor set they always do so I didn't let it but me too much. Not a fan of the handheld but did like there story being told with a use of imagery. The microwave saying "Good" on it influenced me to think that she was good making the twist ending more powerful. The beginning felt long but a good film. Look forward to seeing more of your work.
 
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