Semi Movie Trailer

[William_Robinette]

I shot this for a demo of the dolly I built, but decided to try and write a script for it for my video class this semester.

Tell me what you think please.

http://savefile.com/projects.php?pid=146662

 

[J.R. Hudson]

I loved it. Sometimes even the most simplest subject matters can be nice. For what its worth, nice comps and use of masking, nie coloring and correction, nice choice of score as it felt like a music video (Who was band? I liked).

The talent (little brother?) had that acting thing down; he looked angsty and pissed.

 

[William_Robinette]

Thanks John,

The song is "So Cold" by Breaking Benjamin, and yes, the talent was my little brother.

 

[Hodges]

Great Job man!

 

[Lawsuit_Boy]

Looks great! I love the idea of being completely alone in an enormous environment. The dolly shots were really smooth. Dark and gloomy atmosphere. awesome!

 

[Scumgrief]

I really liked this. Even tho it was just a simple little thing, I really enoyed it. I liked the color to it and it was very smooth. Definately awesome work. Keep it up, can't wait to see more!

 

[skart82]

That was truly excellent. Deeply interesting.

Good job!