cecil995
Well-known member
Como - you didn't 'rephrase' anything - you phrased it.
People may be more apt to help you in the future if you demonstrate through your posts that you are actually making an effort to educate yourself as opposed to just fishing for free help. You'll also be taken much more seriously if you take the time to use proper grammar and spelling.
For example:
comments, not coments
i'll, not ill
guess, not gues
because, not cuz
And my personal favorite - 'what' not wut
That has been needed to be said for awhile now.
I would love to see four scenes of "wut u like wut I been writing"