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Robbie Comeau

Robbie Comeau

Como's back. back again
guys im finishing up a script, and its kinad half way......would any mind to finish it for me, cuz i hate writing.....u can fix the script up to if you want. Ill email you what i got, and u can write it and finish it and send it back, free of charge? are there any lurkers on dvxuser that would want to do this? thanks alot

just pm me
 
maybe I could do your laundry and mow your lawn too while I'm at it. Good luck with that. Perhaps an aspiring writer will be so kind.

Heck Luis he got you to fix his business card :) Como is going to be a good producer someday... Seriously if you can get people to do stuff for you for free... lots of possibilities there...
 
There are writers on here who are willing to work for free, but no one is going to respond the way you're phrasing it. "I'm too lazy/unmotivated to do this so can you do it for me for free?"

Ask nicely, show that you have a passion for your project and try to make at least some kind of compensation for their work. Don't ask for hand outs because often, you get what you pay for.
 
jdajda said:
Heck Luis he got you to fix his business card :)
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Damn - I deserved that one.
Well played, sir.
:)

What can I say - I had some time on my hands.
And sometimes its easier to just show an example of what you mean than it is to write out a detailed description.

But yeah - not anymore.
 
Oh man...Rob (Como), COME ON. haha, what did I tell you about DVXusers ripping on you? I want to join in on the fun now too; you're just making it too easy.

-Kegan
 
Sorry Luis just had to give you a hard time - can't fault you for trying to help out and be a nice guy. I almost opened up photoshop and did one for him too. I probably saw something shiny though and forgot about it.

Just so this thread has some substance - my wife suggested we dedicate our living room to movie watching. Plasma is going into the dining room (classy eh?) and 130" of 2.35:1 projection screen is going up. Anyone want to come do all the move all this crap and hang the thing for me? I really hate sweating. I'm willing to let you eat some of my pretzels.
 
ok sorry guys that was my little brother..............ok no it was me

ive read other posts on dvxuser where people had asked for a favour, and i did see a lot of coments on people saying "sure ill help you"

i gues i DID rephrase it wrong
 
Como - you didn't 'rephrase' anything - you phrased it.

People may be more apt to help you in the future if you demonstrate through your posts that you are actually making an effort to educate yourself as opposed to just fishing for free help. You'll also be taken much more seriously if you take the time to use proper grammar and spelling.

For example:

comments, not coments
i'll, not ill
guess, not gues
because, not cuz

And my personal favorite - 'what' not wut
 
Here's your ending:

Suddenly, a MAN in a black suit enters.

He reaches into his left inner pocket and pulls out a 357 magnum, the world's most powerful handgun.

BANG. BANG. BANG.

Bodies fall to the floor, a Jackson Pollack trail of red blood and guts everywhere.

The man removes a business card from his pocket and drops it into a pool of blood.

He exits.

THE END.
 
Awesome Issac!

Then.... the camera slowly dollies in....

As we get closer to the card, floating in the pool of blood, we can see what it says.....




































carduz7.jpg


FIN!
:thumbsup:
 
I would like to see what you've written so far.

I can offer some advice but I will not do the script for you.
 
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