Scene Critique - Feature in Progress

thisisapocalypse

thisisapocalypse

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Obviously not all from each take is usable, but am curious as to what you all think of this scene - 3 takes from the scene are shown here, 3 shots.

Note, NSFW adult content!

Can't leave this up long as we are going to be submitting to fests but I am curious about feedback. Obviously it will get somewhat shortened although it will be a long scene in sort of the "office" style where the joke keeps going and going and it "goes there."

Shot on Panny GH1.
 
skipped around, but pretty good acting and i liked the writing.

The closer shots looked better lit than the farther, id like to see it cut up.

What did you use for sound, it sounded pretty clean (aside from the 1st clip which was out of sync)

What glass? Lighting setup?

jon
 
jonE5 said:
skipped around, but pretty good acting and i liked the writing.

The closer shots looked better lit than the farther, id like to see it cut up.

What did you use for sound, it sounded pretty clean (aside from the 1st clip which was out of sync)

What glass? Lighting setup?

jon
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Sound: Fostex FR2-LE recorded 96/24 - Rode NT3 on a KTEK boom.

Glass: Close up (docu-style shots) - Zeiss 50mm f/1.4 (@1.4) west german made for the Rollei SL35 mount. The wide shot was an Olympus 17mm f/2.8 pancake.

Lights: 2 softboxes, 2 lights with barndoors in various configurations depending on the shot and lights in the room - relatively low wattage flourescents from Britek (cough!) for this shot. Lighting is better close-up, the shot was so wide that we had a hard time getting lights in close - I think we'll be able to do a little post adjustment and stay on close-ups for most of the shot, however and it will look pretty good.

When we cut it up I think we're going to stick on the close-ups and cut around to reaction shots and the wide shot when focus gets loose.

This was also heavily compressed and downrezzed for vimeo, just for what that's worth.
 
Cool, id be happy to look at any other scenes for you (better if its cut up), when is the target date for release?
 
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