Roadtripped [school short film competition]

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dperlmutter

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Okay, so every year my school puts on a short film competition. They announce a theme that the film should be based on, and this years theme was "life". This is what I came up with.


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Alaina Walton and Alaina
Nick Lepa as Nick
Cheddar as Cheddar
Kevin Shealy as Kevin

(2) Canon T2i
Samyang 18-28mm f4-4.5
Nikon 50mm f1.8
Nady SGM-12
Zoom H2 & H4
Cavision Shoulder Rig
Glidecam Camcrane 200

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I'd love some feedback!
 
I thought it was decent. Here's a few things to watch out for next time.
1. Much of it was overexposed. This is where a butterfly would come in handy. Or just a different location not in the direct sunlight.
2. The acting was mediocre, I get that it's a school project and you most likely didn't have the time or recources to hire pro's

Overall I think you made a nice little film there, with some funny parts. You also had some great shots in there. keep up the good work.
 
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