Revenge

[leepback]

I'd always heard about the famous "movie that goes in reverse"

Those Memento fans out there should have a look at this

WARNING: It's hilarious but is only suitable viewing for non-homophobic adults with a sense of humour.
(have a look at their short called "blowj*b girl" but were getting way off topic now)

Cheers.

Very hard these days not to be compared. Even when not intended.

Too many movies + story lines out there.

You might be interested in a thread I placed on HV20.com regarding originality. Have a look as I think you might see where I was coming from.

Thought you had a good writing style and I liked the imagery of the glasses lined up waiting and the bar scene, but wasn't totally won over with the story.

And a tiny thing that bugged me......when he goes home and sees the dead body of his wife you write...."Overcome by the terror of what meets him inside."

I would have preffered "Overcome by the horror that meets him inside."

Good luck with the voting.

 

[seansshack]

cheers

cheers

To all of you that read, commented and voted on my script: :beer:

I wasn't too sure about writing a western as it may be difficult to get it produced (although have one interested party thus far, so might be pitching for funding later in the year).

It was a fun write and a good stretch of the writing muscles.

Thanks again....