Revelations - a 5D film

Cool piece. One little technical detail - you need to watch your cut-away compositions during scenes like when the detectives are standing over her body.

The screen right detective should be cheated frame right in his singles. It's confusing when he occupies the same space as the screen left character and, if there were dialogue, it would wreak havoc on your eyelines.
 
Thanks. Yeah I didn't get enough coverage, I only had 2 days to shoot it.....I was kicking myself in post!
 
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