Remote Control Death Car (Grindhouse trailer) in 23 hours and 53 minutes

[Justin Demeere]

Hello DVXusers! I would love some feedback on this short I did for a local 24 hour film festival.
The festival rules were you had to complete a short film no longer than 4 minutes in 24 hours and include 3 elements.
Elements:
Prop - Remote control
Location - Knoxville Sunsphere
Dialogue - "I remember the first time I went to jail."

I am working on several shorts in the next couple of months but would love to have some feedback on how to improve since I know DVX is GREAT for that. Thank you and thanks for watching.

GH13
Stock lens; Nikon 50mm f/1.8
Case of beer and red bull.

 

[Nitsuj]

Hmmm... I seem to not be able to link my FB account with my true DVX account. Oh well, next time I'll log in with the real me!