SHORT: reflection

711

711

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Finished up this portrait piece on a friend of mine. Looking for any and all feedback. Feel free to ask any questions. Thanks!


Eric
 
Okay, I'll chime in some feedback. I think you've got a really nice artistic style. I liked your shots, the lighting and the pans. They were excellent. I watched it on my phone, but it looked pretty clear to me. Nice piece.
 
Tetewsky, I would agree there is some noise in there, but I don't feel it's enough to be over the top distracting. I had the iso down a fair bit and my lens opened up to 1.8 when I shot, so I guess it's just something you can't always get around on these types of shoots. But thanks for watching.

Appreciate it Marlon, I definitely put a fair share of effort into this piece. What did you think of the audio? I had been told it was too low so I bumped up all the levels and remixed it.

Is the sound loud enough now?

Thanks guys!

Eric
 
The audio seemed a little low in places I guess where her voice kind of got low, but other than that I think it was fine.
 
Okay, noted. I tried my best to boost the levels, but I think I can still improve the mixing at certain points. Thanks.
 
For the VO, there's a lot of noise in it ?

I hear it's recorded inside a house, I think in a room, directly plugged in into the PC ?
She's holding the mice in her hands ? (I hear some handling sounds I think).
 
711 said:
I would agree there is some noise in there, but I don't feel it's enough to be over the top distracting.
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I hear bird and other noises in the background and hum. I think it is distracting. A v/o should have a quiet back ground IMO.
 
Agreed. Unfortunately, I did not record her VO. She recorded it herself, outside I believe, and gave me the permission to use it.

Eric
 
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