Overall, for being something you threw together, it was good. I normally can't sit through most reels longer than about 40 seconds these days, but I made it through yours, even though I felt a couple snippets maybe could be trimmed.
The shot of the kid and the book (golden!), the snow going into the lamp, and some of the NYC shots like the Empire State Building were most memorable. Good use of overcranking. Works well with busy city life and tele lenses.