Michael Anthony Horrigan
More Cowbell Pictures
That's exactly right. The script we started with got tossed and I had to scramble in the end to really get anything cohesive at all. So in the end it's exactly as you said.I get from the title that he's caught in a cycle or loop, but any more than that, or what happened to him... I was in the dark. I also get from the feedback here that's all you wanted the audience know, so I'll say no more.
It felt to me like you found the location and then made a short to fit around it, rather than writing a script and finding a location to suit it. But that's my only caveat. It's a moody, well shot, well executed piece.
Thanks for dropping by.