Random DVX really short short, and a random poster.

renegadewill

renegadewill

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I made this about 4 months ago, but didn't really show anyone. Tell me what ya think, hate it, or ya just wanna talk sh*t, tell me what's up.

Thanks,
Will


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http://www.veoh.com/videos/v6445145TQdnc7g9
 
The only criticism I have is that there are a lot of cuts, you could have cut a lot of cuts. That sounds funny. Just seemed really jumpy.

Good story though.
 
ahahaha, thanks. Yea, that dialogue pissed me off a lot because it was my little brothers. The one with dark hair kept laughing so I kinda did some rodriguez cutting (He cut around unsyched sections of dialogue in his first feature El Marichi, because he didn't have a sound man. He would shoot, then record all the audio after, so his dialogue is cut crazy, like mine, but my problem is a laughing little brother, and his was not having any location sound). It's not an excuse, but I bet you haven't seen dialogue cut like that in a while.
 
I only had the cam for a couple shoots before I made this and I set the master ped to +15. I was inta not lighting things enough and having crazy scene file settings. I just hadnt experiemented with it enough at this point.
 
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