"Platinum" 24 hour film short

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This is a short we made for the 2010 SF 24 hour film race. We had to write, shoot, edit, and score/sound mix this film within 24 hours. It was directed by myself and my buddy Matt O'Donnell.
This version is the director's cut, meaning the version we got to tweak a little.

This year's theme was "goodbye" and the mandatory prop was a wig.

Enjoy! I'm new on this forum so feedback is welcome!

link to vimeo: http://vimeo.com/11756383
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Looked great. I like the color grade, cinematography, dolly moves, etc.

The only thing I wanted was more of a violent push from the villains to justify the girl smacking all three of them. Maybe the main villain could've grabbed her, and she attacked him in defense. Yes, sounds a bit cliche', but that would've been fine, no?

But yeah, great action, too! Everything felt very comprehensive and for such a short time period especially!

Also, the performances were great! Most of the time, especially in festivals like these, the acting is horrendous.

Cool stuff man!
 
When I saw this on Vimeo, I *liked* it big time. The fighting was nicely choreographed, impressively so.
 
Some of the best fighting I have seen. I have always wanted to have a crack at it.
 
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