Pilot Episode for Web-Series!!!

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pietz

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Hey Guys and Gals!!!

Just wanted to get this out there for some feedback.

http://vimeo.com/33426611

Been working on a web-series called EMPTY SPACES. An original comedy with music following a couple of hapless real estate agents.

Lemme know what you think!!! This community has been a great support, so thanks a ton!!!!!

pietz
 
It had some funny moments, but the pacing felt a little draggy in spots.
I also "get" the Office ​style floating handheld, but it just wears me out. I could only take about 5 minutes or so of it.
 
Wowzer dowzer! That was compelling. Songs and comedy! Like office meets flight of the conchords in a new spin with real estate.

You came, saw and conquered dude! The world is yours
 
@johnthreat. thanks man!!! really appreciate the encouragement. just got my website up if you wanna take a look at more goodies.

www.emptyspacestv.com got another full length episode up, as well as a bunch of 1 minute teasers.....
 
I'm not usually into this kind of comedy, but it won me over with it's complete strangeness. Only thing I would worry about is further episodes seeming "normal" compared to this one. If I had to nitpick, the lip syncing in the woods scene was off sometimes and that always bothers me, but I realize it's a very difficult thing to get right. I enjoyed it though, nice work :)
 
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