"Pictures Of You" - There is life after loss (Canon 550D short)

[FlareFilms]

hi guys. I'm a student film maker who goes to peter symonds college in winchester. I just finished my second short film and and I thought I'd share it with you guys. I'd love some feedback whether it's positive or negative. Thanks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y1fnSnfVPwQ&feature=channel_video_title

 

[gonzo_entertainment]

Well, technical criticisms only...
Camera is shaky for no reason. Static shots that could have been locked down on a tripod weren't and the result looks sloppy.

Looks like you didn't use any lights at all. Very flat looking because of no real key light on the talent and no rim light to make them pop out from the background. Also some white balance issues.

The edit wasn't bad, some decent shot selection.