they look really good. Awesome blacks and shadows. take the mast. ped level down really low? I know I drop it down a bit most of the time and the results are great.
the grabs make it look like you shot 24p so the interlacing shouldn't be coming from interlacing - in my own footage that usually is the result of improper pull down removal. so if you did shoot 24p or pa I would recheck.
Overall very good looking footage and interesting subject matter! I like the editing at end after the dancers - editing on the flash is nice!
couple of other things - I think the audio comes up a bit to quickly in the beginning during the interview, you miss what he says the first time. maybe bring the music up but really punch the volume on the cut.
this was a photoshoot so I would expect to see a flash at every place I am to believe that a picture was taken - it's a small visual cue, but without it the viewer subconciously gets the feeling what their seeing isn't real.
The dancing scene seems out of place, the photographer disappears - am I missing something?
What's with the long black at the end?
I had no control over anything. I didn't set up any lighting. I just shot a video for fun. This was practice. I like to take situations I have no control over, and try to make something cool. I love the idea of restrictions. I like to make something out of nothing. For me its about fun. Plus I got to hang out with hot chicks all day!