Opinions on short film

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WorkingClassSaints

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First up, hello everyone.

I'm just trying to get some feedback on my first 'proper' short film. The story is inspired by an existing song as you'll notice, so it might be considered a bit of a fan music video, but to be honest it wasn't worth the time trying to record an original song for it. It was a college project after all, a case of "here's a lot of equipment, now go out and produce a 3 minute film". In the end it went down well and I'm pretty happy with it but it's all about getting better so any advice/opinions would be great.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nCdNmsvU-mo

It was shot on the DVX100a, except for the animations which were on a consumer digital camera, a samsung digimax L60 to be precise.

Cheers.
 
I would check it out, but I'm at work and can't watch it from here. Will try and remember to look at it when I get home.
 
Pretty good! I had a hard time exactly following the story of it, but a lot of the images were good. The mouse was really cool. Not sure what it had to do with the story, but it added nice production value. I liked the text and arrows labeling people, and the stop motion at the beginning.

The opening text wasn't nearly long enough to read it.

Definitely some talent here, especially for a school project.
 
Looks good.

Only...Watch out for "whitebalance".

The small "mouse" ? is funny :-p

If it's ment to be a "videoclip" it's not bad done
 
Looks good! Very creative and professional. Also funny. The mouse was great and so was the toast popping up. Nice work.
 
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