One Minute Short Film

Haha. The Kill Bill'esque "storyline", if that's what I'd call it, seemed... sub-par.

Random B&W sequences leads one to believe you just finished watching Vol. 1 and 2.

I see potential. But it seemed more like a trailer... a disproportionately awkward one at that.


One last thing... why did she put the gun in the back of her pants if she was only going to walk a few steps and then take it out again?

I bet she felt silly.
 
I think that this story will be better if you shooting at night and a dark look, the bright-overexposed look is not effective for this story for my taste.

regards
 
new version lot better looking.
and to critique from another pov, i think the chick has potential, her legs and butt look really cute in those pants, but her hair is in serious need of repair. she'd could be pretty hott with a decent style and getting rid of about a foot of split ends. also getting out of the camary with that outfit just aint happening. too alcoholic housewife with a mid life crisis. a motorcycle would be cool but predictable. maybe a 60s-70s muscle car.
 
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