the hard transitions of black got old after the first 20 seconds and unbearable after a minute. very harsh and served no usefullness from my POV. besides that it would have been a nice edit.
Good work..if you can get it. Must have good lens stabilization....ahem.
Nice lighting throughout. And th e movements of talent and camera were well paced.
I like the black frame technique. But as mentioned, may be too many/frequent for a piece this long. I wonder whether interspersing with lingering dissolves to go with the whole err..fluidity of the piece might give some added dimension. Black frames did seem gratuitous on the credits. I bet you have an interesting making of story
Found the black frames horribly distracting. Lighting not bad, but did notice some very distracting shadows, the sort one sees in stills lit by hard flash. Sorry.