No one commented on my excerpts...

Same here -- 500 Error on the server. The link has the ellipsis (...) in it, so I don't think that's correct.
 
yeah you should fix the link but...
i'm going to use my ESP to guess what my critique will be. lets see how well i do.

the story was not bad. the image quality could use a little more contrast. and if you want to pull off that noir look you're lighting is going to have to be waaaay more dramatic. and the blood thing... well who knows what a kitten in a blender looks like?
 
um lose the three dots in your link and post the actual one. here's the one from your proginal post...

compilation

okay first i've been here for a little while and things get posted so much that your thread drops and not everyone watches everything, but if you give it a little time someone will see it, post, and bump you back up on the board. that aside i think it looked okay...i'd like a complete scene though give me a feel for what's going on. how'd you light the "night" room with the laptop?
 
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