nine minutes of bike stoke

yow Dory...fix up the link. I was able to watch it but when i put the cursor over it it didnt change to signify it was an active link. I was just idly clicking away and happened to double click the title and it came up.

I think u have some really good shots in there and i liked it overall...no time came up on my vid so i cant tell u where it is sorry :( But what i will say is that u need to get some more interesting angles to keep people interested. Alot of shots where shots where u could ask the guys to do the trick twice...or 3 times so u can get different angles. Reallly ups production value and interest since it would seem as if u had 3 cameras (wide, medium, CU or XCU). The shots with the guys jumping off the ramp into the water...i was just wwaaaiiiting to see a low angle frontal shot of the bike passing the camera :). but alas all i saw were their backs. More CU's using Shallow DOF like some of the field shots. loos like a wheat field i duno...but that can really be utilized. (i did like the field shots...just thought they could be pushed more) Do some of those things and ur golden man! imagine intercuting between 3 shots for the same trick! goodstuff!

Oh...and a little pushing of the contrast whould really help....the colours seem washed out.

U have a good base here...so work on it and it will be reaally good.
 
Bump for adding a fixed link to a different site while I work mine out.

janbredz thanks for your ideas, definitely see what your saying bro.
 
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