Flintstone
Well-known member
I agree with Neil (iamloser). Get that very sexy girl out of the picture, and put someone that at the very least resembles a pro shooter (male or female). My first impression was of a sleazy site; it took a while to adjust, but first impressions matter a lot. No offence to you our your very sexy and beautiful model, but it was way overdone... bikini... come on. At least, if you wanted to have a girl to display your product, you should at least present her with dignity. There are after all female shooters out there, so you don't want to loose that market share.
Your site needs to look more professional. It looks like it was slapped on quickly; which may very well be the case. As mentioned earlier, PayPal is a good thing to put too. Look at other sites to inspire you. I also have to reiterate what has been said above, try to make better clips; put in some narration, a few one-liners here and there.
I don't know what the real price of the product is, but it should be written on the site. Have some comparative feature-pricing from more then one competitor. This will help emphasize the message that even though there are similar products out there, yours is of the same caliber, if not better, and makes more financial sense.
Your site needs to look more professional. It looks like it was slapped on quickly; which may very well be the case. As mentioned earlier, PayPal is a good thing to put too. Look at other sites to inspire you. I also have to reiterate what has been said above, try to make better clips; put in some narration, a few one-liners here and there.
I don't know what the real price of the product is, but it should be written on the site. Have some comparative feature-pricing from more then one competitor. This will help emphasize the message that even though there are similar products out there, yours is of the same caliber, if not better, and makes more financial sense.