New short film up!! Looking for critique...

Fun to watch: cute cast is funny together, above average cam and lighting work. Great short. However when the women are sneaking up behind the guy in the kitchen- their footsteps are so loud you think "he's gotta hear that". Maybe just pull the audio down of thier steps? My 2 pennies.
 
I enjoyed it. Well acted, well directed, and the sound was on point(though a few parts I think one of the girls was a bit faint.)

Fun story. It was well written and well paced. Although the two girls I felt had a bit more chemistry than the guy(I think his name was Justin) who entered. It was fairly entertaining. Keep up the good work =)
 
Great job ! ....thought the ending was a bit abrupt.

Maybe a spinning ring like inception ...nah just messing .
 
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