What's with the Spanish sub-titles? I'd make different versions of the short, one with subtitles, one without.
5 Minutes of a persona talking at a table is a long time, and it was obvious from about 15 seconds in that the dude was either dead or tied up and soon would be dead.
The actress didn't really convince me she was Lily. Lots of the dialog felt wordy, unnatural, or forced. She stumbled on a few of the lines.
