first off - good job! kept my attention through the whole video!
suggestions:
+ framing was off in some shots
+ focus was off in most shots
+ grading was a bit to much IMO, but thats personal taste - i would have kept the grading more simple, especially in the kitchen scenes...
#dope.... one thing i can suggest is when a song has 2 verses i kind of split the footage up where there are scenes from the first verse that i only use for that verse and the second verse has been kind of lead up to all new scenes for the second verse and same thing goes for a third verse if one... i may recycle the previous scenes a time or two but i definitely switch it up... its my strategy to make the viewers feel like they might miss something if they turn the video off early... check out my t2i work www.rellyrale.wix.com/rellyralefilms