I might re-edit one more time. I think I'll have to keep the Barry White in there, because it wouldn't work otherwise. However, because I am "repurposing" that element, I need to remove any reference to me. I'm not really doing it for promotional purposes. Just fun.
Thanks for the comments about the sound - that was a really fun experiment for me - haven't used sound as a dimensional element in anything I have done yet, and it stretched me a bit I think.
And JAMBREDZ, agreed about the grading. A touch more black/contrast next version. It's hard to know exactly which way Youtube conversion will go with it.
Thanks for all the views and responses guys and gals. I LOVE my DVX and will never sell it. Maybe my kid will use it soon?