christa McGuire
New member
i so want to see that it seems totally awesome
My Soul To Keep - presented by Easy Water Films
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Dick Campbell
Veteran
beautiful photography, nice lighting effects on the interior shots. thought the male actor dialog was a bit stilted.
Danielleus
Well-known member
Hey,
Just caught the piece. I liked what was going on but didn't think it was as effective as it could have been.
I thought the actresses were good and they seemed to really throw themselves into the roles. The disappearing effect was good, albeit maybe a little overdone. The locations were nice and I thought the lighting was fine, except for what looked like something you shot day for dusk.
The story didn't really do it for me. It seemed to move too slow or there wasn't enough going on to warrant the length it took to tell.
But I liked the idea and thought it was a winner. Maybe it just deeped to be a bit short. But thanks for showing.
Just caught the piece. I liked what was going on but didn't think it was as effective as it could have been.
I thought the actresses were good and they seemed to really throw themselves into the roles. The disappearing effect was good, albeit maybe a little overdone. The locations were nice and I thought the lighting was fine, except for what looked like something you shot day for dusk.
The story didn't really do it for me. It seemed to move too slow or there wasn't enough going on to warrant the length it took to tell.
But I liked the idea and thought it was a winner. Maybe it just deeped to be a bit short. But thanks for showing.
hoz
Well-known member
neat idea!
a lot of effort went into this, and it shows. the candle light shot, the daylight shots, the girls' clothes and such, and the story itself, nice!
story- i had a problem when the gentleman first saw the ghost take his flowers. he seemed annoyed. that made me think that either he already saw this ghost for sometime, or he himself is a ghost. his reactions carried the same way throughout the entire flick. it threw me off. true, he could be that seasoned old soul who is wise beyond his years but i don't know, i'd rather see him freak out a bit for awhile. my two cents...
the girls were terrific!
the story is ambitious! especially for 6 minutes, much credit for tackling it!
a lot of effort went into this, and it shows. the candle light shot, the daylight shots, the girls' clothes and such, and the story itself, nice!
story- i had a problem when the gentleman first saw the ghost take his flowers. he seemed annoyed. that made me think that either he already saw this ghost for sometime, or he himself is a ghost. his reactions carried the same way throughout the entire flick. it threw me off. true, he could be that seasoned old soul who is wise beyond his years but i don't know, i'd rather see him freak out a bit for awhile. my two cents...
the girls were terrific!
the story is ambitious! especially for 6 minutes, much credit for tackling it!