Robbie Comeau
Como's back. back again
Looked prett good Michael. The one thing that stuck out to me was the opening shot with the pan. Once the actor passed the column and goes down a step, he is framed so low that it was distracting. I would cut it at the column. It also killed the momentum for me. Other than that, it had a good rhythm.
It looks like he meant to do this, so we can see the talent in the BG. Yes it could've gone a tad lower for framing purposes, but I think the shot was suppose to go from foreground to background. Just could of used a little lower framing.
Am I right Mike?
Nice reel man,
Robbie