My first personal project with my HVX200

I understand it's a rough cut, so I won't bother with any tech issues. I find the story very misleading, but maybe that's a good thing. You are using the language of film in a way that doesn't give any satisfation. O.k. the acting is pretty stilted, but the story is unbelievable. The dude makes a race challenge on some known racer, bets $3000, chick is included, then backs out of the race, and has his homie try to sweet talk the girl into a lift. Meanwhile the other dude just disappears alltogether, and the chick is acting weird. There's potential there, just curious what the intent is. As it stands I would say this is pretty f'n bad all around. Sorry Trout, though maybe you've got some good answers. A for effort though.
 
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i kept waiting for a gang bang to break out at the gas station, if that was the case i'd say good job! personally i couldn't get past the acting, writing, and audio which all need alot of work.
 
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