My First Music Video

I thought it was well done. For some reason I was pulled out of it near the end when the kids faces and women and such appeared. I think it was possibly the transitions but I am not sure. Maybe some slight slowing would help. Good job!
 
haha, I remember the grab of the cop awhile back. Anyway, I really liked your locations for this video. and listening to the lyrics, i see why you chose them. and I'm assuming that you just wanted to show a different side of the "streets" with the shots of the people. They do feel a little misplaced at first, but I think they can be justified by your vision.

All of these shots looked very well lit and pretty natural. I liked that about it. No overdone CC. Great job.
 
thanks guys.

it stil needs some re working. but the static shots of the kid and woman in the end was red flagged by everyone who saw it.

so i need to do some reworking.

Thanks a bunch!

aram i will get back to you soon.
 
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