I liked the video a lot. Very interesting with story line, b roll and several locations/ I think the production is very good.
The only thing I think that would have made your video shine is some color correcting & color grading. This footage looks raw rite from the camera.
One question I have regarding the studio scene with the white background, how did you exactly do it? I want to shoot a artist in a location like that but as of now have no idea how, let me know