My Coca Cola P. Sun TV Commercial

Oops i think i posted this thread in the wrong forum, sorry! I would delete it but it doesn't look like there's an option to do so. Maybe a mod can move this to the proper location, sorry again!

JM
 
Nice. Well shot, good editing, liked the actors. I'm not a big fan of screaming music with zero anything else on the soundtrack on a commercial, but otherwise this looks good.
 
Thanks for the comment! :)

Yeah, OK, maybe next time if i do something similar I'll see how it looks with some of the natural ambiance of the environment and sound from the actors (walking, laughing, etc).

JM
 
Actually, no need to wait. Why don't you take the material you already have, and edit in a bit of the ambiance, and work to integrate the music? As an experiment, one with, and one without (like you did), that way you can learn from side by side experiments, and benefit from this knowledge in the future.

Regardless, this is pretty good anyhow :)

Brutally honest: the key is to stand out from the crowd. What you did was pretty competent. That's good. It means nobody is gonna stand and point fingers "look at the incompetent". Now think: what would it take to be better than "merely competent?" "What would it take to be great?" "How can I make myself stand out from the crowd?"

Good luck!
 
OldCorpse said:
Actually, no need to wait. Why don't you take the material you already have, and edit in a bit of the ambiance, and work to integrate the music? As an experiment, one with, and one without (like you did), that way you can learn from side by side experiments, and benefit from this knowledge in the future.

Regardless, this is pretty good anyhow :)
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Good idea, thanks. :)

what would it take to be better than "merely competent?" "What would it take to be great?" "How can I make myself stand out from the crowd?"
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So what's the answer, what's the answer? :2vrolijk_08: hehe :)
 
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