My 60-Second Comedy Short!

It could be much MUCH better if you just added in some dark music and possibly sped things up a little bit. I also thought you could have had it be in color and just done a bit of color correcting to kinda add to the depressed/dark mood you had going on there.

Also, you may want to work on compression a little bit. I'm sure if you just cut the movie size in half to like 320x240 it would load much quicker.

I was wondering how you were going to make that funny, you got me to laugh a little though.
 
Waited 15 minutes for download on a high speed cable connection and it was only at 50%. Sorry man, gave up.
 
With regard to color vs. B&W . . . if it's all in color then the "twist" ending will be revealed from the outset. That's the main reason it starts in B&W.

I know what you mean about the comedy part. It's was originally intended to be a spoof of those "brain on drugs" type of commercials. Some people have told me it's more of an addiction piece than a comedy. Maybe I should label it as such!

I just recompressed it for a faster download. File is a 13MB WMV now.

Agreed about the music! Alas, I'm no composer. I need to pair some music with this film.
 
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I liked it. I'm not sure about putting some music. I think the silence make it more drama... Heavy ambiance.

I really liked it. No pbm to download it though
 
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