Music Video shot on 7D

Well the main problem is you're violating the 180 rule throughout the whole video, also someone sitting in a chair in a motel doesn't really hold the attention for the duration of the video. It could have worked if you mixed up the motion, she could have been pacing around the room the whole time, creating some drama and making us unsure of what she was going to do. Also the performances were pretty much one note the whole time. In a relationship piece like this there should be peaks and valleys, he get super pissed, he calms down, becomes sympathetic, becomes angry again, and same for her, shes pacing around, acting pretty crazy, then thinks maybe if I'm sweet to him he'll love me again so she kisses him and there's this weird awkward kiss from a crazy woman.

There are some nice shots and nice moments, I think you'll improve and build on these as you go.
 
Thanks for the feedback. I love it. The girl never did anything like this and was nervous. The artist had his girlfriend there so it may he may had been nervous too and base on that lets not even talk about them kissing. 180 rule is right. I should be drag outside a shot! I have no excuse why I did that.
 
Nah it's cool, sometimes on set you're thinking about so many other things, like why is this girl so nervous and why is this guys girlfriend just starring at my actress, haha... next time you'll remember though!
 
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