Hey heres a rough cut of a $0 budget music video we shot for some friends. Not polished yet, I still need to edit some shots to the beat, add a few more shots, and CC some more but I'd say its 90% done. Enjoy!
Show more of the car/ driving scene and less performances. Make the car go to the tempo of the beat going faster and slower to symbolize the music that is happening. I personal think you have a good project here, BUT if you keep it performance base you just lost a great potential to gain more fans.
Trust me, use more b roll and story sequence and less performances....