music video: opinions wanted

[t-h-e-w-h-o]

I shot this low budget music video for a group called F-SQUAD and i have been editing it for about an hour. The project was fairly unorganized and we didnt have much time. I want to know what you think of it thus far. Keep in mind a lot more things need to be changed. For example, theres going to be heavy color correction in park scenes and obviously the green screen will be removed/replaced.

But i basically want to know, what do y ou like, what do you hate, and most importantly, does it even keep you entertained at all.

Heres the link. its a 120MB mp4 quicktime file.

http://www.jordanfreda.com/temp/F-Squad_-_What_You_Got_In_Store(remix)EDIT1.mp4

Thanks

 

[Noel Evans]

big file. Can you downsize it a little?

EDIT: I just tried the dl again and im getting 600kbps no probs

 

[dougster77]

I am sure you will have a blast keying that footage... : )


Some of the shots are a little blown out... Might try adding in some slow mo stuff...

A hardcore color grading to something dark or sureal may help fix or cover up the blown out shots...

Some shots are a little shaky so you might could stabilize them in post and slow them down...

If you have any b-roll it might help seperate things out a little bit more...


Overall it could probably look very cool with some heavy post / vfx work...

 

[Noel Evans]

Yeah that key is gonna be..... hard. Pretty much agree with Doug. Theres a bit of work to do. Im sure youre going to fix the syncing, but I would sync my tracks before starting the cuts.