music video Im working on 7d
- Thread starter anthony jackson
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Pittsburgh0205
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Why does your aspect ratio change 20 seconds into the video?
RawkThisFistRed
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Loved the song. Music is music at the end of the day. Shouldn't be getting anyone mad.
The editing bothers me a bit, to be honest. For instance, the color grading between the close up shot at 0:18 and the wide at 0:19 of the gentleman on the phone really felt a bit odd. I tried to view it as objectively as a could and it just felt wrong to my eye.
The original shots around the beginning where they're switching between three seperate angles of the gentleman rapping while playing the game and looking out his window felt off for a few separate reasons. His face was overly lit in the profile shot, the way the shots juttered in between each other only because it felt like cross-fades instead of hard cuts. Maybe it was Vimeo, but a good chunk of the piece felt like that.
Having said that, the video's still visually stunning, but I feel like it could use a bit more. Hopefully the second day of your shooting will give the entire piece some feeling, as opposed to just being a generic rap video. I just feel like the entire piece was missing a theme or story.
But great start!
The editing bothers me a bit, to be honest. For instance, the color grading between the close up shot at 0:18 and the wide at 0:19 of the gentleman on the phone really felt a bit odd. I tried to view it as objectively as a could and it just felt wrong to my eye.
The original shots around the beginning where they're switching between three seperate angles of the gentleman rapping while playing the game and looking out his window felt off for a few separate reasons. His face was overly lit in the profile shot, the way the shots juttered in between each other only because it felt like cross-fades instead of hard cuts. Maybe it was Vimeo, but a good chunk of the piece felt like that.
Having said that, the video's still visually stunning, but I feel like it could use a bit more. Hopefully the second day of your shooting will give the entire piece some feeling, as opposed to just being a generic rap video. I just feel like the entire piece was missing a theme or story.
But great start!
anthony jackson
Well-known member
Thank you RawkThisfirstRed, yeah i have a bit of work to do with this one we have one day left to film,and then I will do the editing all over,thank you for pointing out those problems .
brownpaperbagproductions
Well-known member
Maybe this is just a difference in taste, or a temp place holder type thing, but the font is really lame.
Most of the visuals are nice, I thought it looked too blown out the first viewing but it grew on me. The slo-mo could be smoother tho.
Most of the visuals are nice, I thought it looked too blown out the first viewing but it grew on me. The slo-mo could be smoother tho.