MUSIC VIDEO: Music Video Critique

Is it the white rapper? Framing? Unsteady shots? Certainly, somewhere, I'm sure there could be an improvement. I was asking for a critique in terms of cutting with a story line, flow, color, etc.. noone's willing to comment? Dead link? Somebody give me somethin.. let's try again..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YbXwtgXXCZA
 
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Can't believe nobody stopped by to comment. Anyway, I liked the video and the song. It's really good and very professional. I thought the storyline was good as well and the way you incorporated the slow motions shots. I thought your lighting was good as well. The only thing I would suggest is on the performance shots, also throw a wide of him in there. Most of the performance shots are medium close-ups. BTW - the walking performance shots of him were nice and seemed very smooth. Good work, man!

What cam did you use?
 
Marlon,

Thanks for the peep. I was laying down on the tailgate of a truck to get the walking shots. I agree, I had too many medium / close-up's, and not enough wide / medium shots. Everything was shot on an hvx200 with the exception of the on-car wheel shot, it was captured with a Panasonic fz28s.. I didn't like the idea of my hvx inches away from its uncertain demise. I appreciate your comments as well as your suggestions.

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