Personal opinion I don't like videos where I can tell that it seems like it was shot with only 1 lens the whole video, on top of that you gave the audience the same field of view perspective the whole video. No wides, extreme close ups low/high angles etc.
Secondly I don't like watching a video where optical flares are placed with no light source, to me it doesn't look right.
Finally the ending of the video where you showed the little girl was actually pretty cool, I would have used that more through out the video instead of waiting so late to introduce it.
I think you had a good song, a lot of people dedicated to the project as well as pretty good quality, but imo you needed to switch up the angles and camera movements + allow a better edit. Overall I would say good but should have been a lot better.
