Miches the last tropical paradise

[arquitommy]

Ok this is something I shoot during Easter Break in Miches with the Pentax KX and the proprietary lenses and a Davis & Stanford tripod at 720p 24p.
Images from Miches, Dominican Republic, 2010.

In the most beautiful island in the Caribbean is this amazing tropical paradise that still exists almost untouched by man.

I want your opinion and suggestions to make the next video better, thank you very much.

 

[jghenderson]

My main issue with the video is that I think you focused way too much on bushes/leaves, that to be frank could be anywhere in the world. They are not particularly beautiful bushes...they just look pretty normal. Also the shot at 1:00 looks messy and dirty. It doesn't make the beach seem attractive.

If what you are wanting to do is argue that this island is the most beautiful island in the caribbean then you need to show more beautiful locations so that the viewer will be convinced.

 

[arquitommy]

Thank you so much for your feedback, what you see at 1:00 is not the beach is a small lake that forms near the edge of the beach.

Very good and constructive your criticism, and very valuable to encourages me to make my future projects better.