FEATURE: MARKED MAN action/thriller

[bdpictures]

"How do they stop a man with nothing to lose?" Find out more information at www.markedman2012.com.

Would like to hear what everyone thinks.

Thanks,

Gregory Sherad Martin
Black Diamond Pictures
CEO, President
www.bd-pictures.com

 

[RONINFILMER]

The idea that you used comic book like imagery when you had no footage was very cool. It gave the sense of what the movie is about. Instead of wasting money and time before you fully decided on the idea you wanted to test it out . Its a genre action movie so you will have a audience for it. The problem I had with it was the context of the story was difficult to understand. Usually in a developed movie the story line automatically makes sense. One option to make the story line more understandable is having a initial set up of who the person is in terms of occupation and his hierarchy in the organization he works for or team hes part of, or if he works alone. You did have some of that but it wasn't clear to me. For example lets say I write a movie about a hit man, most likely he has a boss who semi intimidates him or who has alot more power. Then the incident happens. In replacement killers for just an example, the main character decides not to kill the cop. Boom that incident causes everyone to come after him and makes up most of the story. Then the rest of the trailer is him and his ally fighting and dealing with the antagonism. I think if you created a storyline that has the set up, incident, and sense of battle against the main antagonism obvious and clear which you already have some of, your trailer and film will work better.

 

[bdpictures]

Thanks for taking the time to look at it. Once we have the footage I'm pretty sure you'll see that it works.

 

[Matt Harris]

I think the tagline reads better as "how do YOU stop a man..."

 

[Matt Harris]

Cool, i just watched it. I like the drawings as storyboard trailer, very neat. Nice site, good music, good fonts, looks very clean and pro. good luck.