jeremytuttle
Well-known member
Blaine said:The stuff about Hitler came completely out of left field and I actually laughed because it felt so out of place with where she had been going.
Even though I really enjoyed this one (toward the top if not the top of my list), I do agree that the Hitler thing did come out of left field. I understand that her mind is wandering all over the place but I think it was a little too wandered. Just my opinion and that is the only thing that bugged me. I really liked this one and it inspires me to try and write something with more realistic dialogue... well, maybe after SpyFest